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The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 19:08, 23 February 2025 (UTC)

Geneva Window

Harry Clarke's "Geneva Window"
Harry Clarke's "Geneva Window"
Created by Bogger (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 33 past nominations.

Bogger (talk) 12:09, 28 January 2025 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - This hook could be rewritten to be a bit easier to parse. I think emphasizing the main irony (that it wasn't installed in Geneva despite being called Geneva Window) would work better - how about: "...that Harry Clarke's Geneva Window (pictured) was never installed in Geneva because of the "grave offense" it might cause?"
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

QPQ: No - Please link a review to pass this
Overall: Overall, good article and good nomination, just needs QPQ and the hook is a bit difficult to read.

However I personally found that the article could use a bit of expansion on some sections, such as the description of the subject matter of the work, and in clarifying the bit that says the window was "too controversial in nature, by virtue of the subject matter more than the images themselves to be approved." This is just a suggestion since it already meets the DYK requirement for length. Luiysia (talk) 20:24, 28 January 2025 (UTC)

I'll continue to beef up the article-Bogger (talk) 21:25,30 January 2025 (UTC)
Thanks, pass! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Luiysia (talk • contribs) 22:57, 30 January 2025 (UTC)