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Nominator: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 09:54, 5 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 21:39, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing now. I am not familiar with the topic, but will try.

General comments

  • Based on which criteria did you select the people and the observances listed in this article? Did you try to select the most important ones (but what does "importance" mean here exactly?), or is it just a random list based on personal taste? For example, why is African-American Music Appreciation Month not in the list? Why is Messi in the people's list but not Lord Kelvin?
  • I am unsure why we have to list birthdays and deaths of people, while not listing historical anniversaries, which seem more important to me?

Specific comments

  • Fun fact is that no other month of a given year starts with the same day as June (e.g., no other month this year starts on Sunday). Could be mentioned?
  • June 2023 and June 2024 had the highest average temperature of all Junes in history, could also be mentioned.
  • Roman emperors Nero and Commodus renamed the month; even though this didn't last long, it seems quite pertinent to this particular article and is worth mentioning.
  • The Dragon Boat Festival, observed in China and by the Chinese communities of Southeast Asia, may commence between late May and mid-June. – Why is this under "Single-day observances" if it's not a single day?
  • The following are global holidays which are formally observed by the United NationsWorld Milk Day is not in the list but was created by the UN?
  • Why are other calendars mentioned in "Religious single-day observances" but not the Chinese one?
  • The first day of June commences with International Children's Day – only in some countries, mostly it is the 20 November, so this is a bit misleading.
  • As of 5 February 2025, June last occurred 144 days ago (UTC); it will be June again on 1 June 2025. – That it will be June again on 1 June is not a helpful information, that goes without saying. I would suggest to either add the days until next June, or delete the whole sentence.

Thanks for this article. I hope the above points are helpful. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 21:39, 5 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @LunaEatsTuna: – Just to check if you are still up to it? --Jens Lallensack (talk) 09:57, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
Yes! Just been a bit busy with other stuff – sorry. Thank you for reviewing it; I will be able to work on it later in the week! ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 09:58, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]
No problem. Take your time! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 10:22, 12 February 2025 (UTC)[reply]