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Diff · History 0 Development and technology:
Diff · History -4 copyedit
Diff · History 125 Development and technology: clarifying the first non-video arcade game; which happens to have a direct connection through Nutting
Diff · History -502 unlocking after refactoring. Hopefully this will prepare us better to improve the article.
Diff · History 7 again structured like the FA articles; now the Development section needs some work to get rid of all the repetitions
Diff · History 4 taking cues from featured articles Donkey Kong and Space Invaders
Diff · History -12 There is no drawing AFAICR, it's irrelevant anyway, because just like in a real duel, you don't win just because you draw faster. Only when this helps you in shooting the other guy faster is it relevant.
Diff · History -4 History: overlinking
Diff · History -25 History: I'm pretty sure that the mP version still had TTL chips, that's why I said "..alone"; the distinction is probably lost on most lay readers anyway, as is the detail of "TTL".
Diff · History 4 Technology: okay, let's stay in the past tense then. that means something that was before what we just said needs to be in past perfect
Diff · History -6 There's no reason to be more specific; otherwise it sounds like there could have been a non-video arcade game that used a microprocessor.
Diff · History 12 History: not necessarily a fact, just their rationale
Diff · History -35 History: either add a comma before "who are unfamiliar" or just scratch the whole (unnecessary) phrase
Diff · History -55 History: make the sentence active, and name the person rather than the corporation.
Diff · History -1 History: otherwise it's the chips' name
Diff · History -4 History: it was designed as a designed game... <shudder>
Diff · History 11 Technology: 2-player game
Diff · History -5 Technology: tweak
Diff · History 0 Technology: this article needs a lot of work on the tense; I am not entirely clear on it myself
Diff · History -14 Technology: any non-coin-operated arcade games that used a microprocessor?
Diff · History 6 History: either "is...being" or "was...having been"
Diff · History 35 it was the first microprocessor-based arcade game, full stop (the TTL part was meant to explain what had been used before, but the sentence could have been misread).
Diff · History -14 Technology: it's either "it is the first to use" (or that used) or "it introduced", but not "it was the first to introduce": introduce implies it was the first
Diff · History 19 History: cit need
Diff · History -84 Technology: it allowed other things; non-referenced OR
Diff · History -34 Technology: copyedit
Diff · History 1 Technical: copyedit
Diff · History 8 anachronism
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