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| Page | Top Gun: Maverick (Log · Page History) |
| User | HolyT (Edit Counter· Top Edits) |
| Total edits | 26 |
| Minor edits | 1 (3.8%) |
| (Semi-)automated edits | 0 (0%) |
| Reverted edits | 0 (0%) |
| atbe1 | 44 |
| Added (bytes)2 | 174 |
| Deleted (bytes) | -118 |
Minor edits
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1 (3.8%)
Major edits
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25 (96.2%)
(Semi-)automated edits
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0 (0%)
Manual edits
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26 (100%)
Reverted edits
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0 (0%)
Unreverted edits
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26 (100%)
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| Date | Links | Size | Edit summary |
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| 2022-09-06 20:25 | Diff · History | -1 | ce per WP:SSF and WP:SSF. Changed stylization "TOPGUN" to normal case "Top Gun." See talk page, archive 1: Talk:Top_Gun:_Maverick/Archive_1#Misuse_of_stylized_form_TOPGUN_(see_WP:SSF_and_WP:CSF) |
| 2022-09-06 20:23 | Diff · History | 1 | →top: ce per WP:SSF and WP:SSF. See talk page, archive 1: Talk:Top_Gun:_Maverick/Archive_1#Misuse_of_stylized_form_TOPGUN_(see_WP:SSF_and_WP:CSF) |
| 2022-09-06 20:05 | Diff · History | -18 | →Plot: ce simpler; fixed punctuation |
| 2022-09-06 20:03 | Diff · History | -27 | →Plot: ce more accurate and closer to what is communicated in the movie; rm slangy "push into" language in favor of simpler, more direct phrasing; new phrasing uses the language of the film and clearly shows cause and effect as depicted |
| 2022-09-06 19:52 | Diff · History | 5 | →Plot: ce fixed grammar error (commonly known as "dangling participle"—a participle with an unclear subject that doesn't match other nearby parts of the sentence) and used language that fits more closely what the movie uses |
| 2022-08-10 19:55 | Diff · History | -11 | →Casting: ce further refined the previous edit: The word "previously" adds nothing but confusion here. |
| 2022-08-10 19:55 | Diff · History | -1 | →Casting: ce fixed a really garbled paragraph |
| 2022-08-10 19:48 | Diff · History | -4 | →Plot: ce em dashes and spacing |
| 2022-08-10 19:47 | Diff · History | 31 | →Plot: ce clarifying: "accomplishment" is different from "execution"; also adding the plot-relevant point that the new plan was deemed less likely to accomplish the mission; the team didn't engage the SAMs—the SAMs engaged them; consistent use of plural verbs for team (before this edit, there was one singular verb and one plural—you have to choose one and stick with it for the same noun in the same sentence) |
| 2022-07-06 23:43 | Diff · History | -6 | →Cast: ce rm "former"; the admiral may be "retired," but "former" is an awkward usage here. It's sufficient and accurate to say that Penny is the daughter of an admiral |
| 2022-07-06 23:42 | Diff · History | -17 | →Cast: ce clarity; missing word |
| 2022-07-06 23:39 | Diff · History | 15 | →Plot: ce more specific; the Navy wasn't directed merely to bomb it; bombing has a purpose (an effect). Someone should get the exact language from the movie to be sure |
| 2022-07-06 23:38 | Diff · History | 9 | →Plot: ce numbers per MOS:NUMNOTES (can't open a sentence with a figure); the figure of 35 years is not specified in the movie; this can only be (incorrectly) inferred from the real-world timeline of the release of the two movies, which cannot be imposed on the in-universe timeline |
| 2022-07-06 23:31 | Diff · History | -6 | →Plot: ce "another" doesn't add anything except confusion; no reader will think that it is the same SAM as some other SAM mentioned earlier |
| 2022-07-06 23:29 | Diff · History | 16 | →Plot: ce clarity and accuracy |
| 2022-07-06 23:28 | Diff · History | 66 | →Plot: ce fixed some awkward syntax and a–an errors, but it could still be pared down |
| 2022-07-06 23:25 | Diff · History | 4 | →Plot: ce missing word |
| 2022-07-06 23:25 | Diff · History | 6 | →Plot: ce changed to normal tone and style for a general audience (don't use military writing style; see WP:SSF) |
| 2022-07-06 23:06 | Diff · History | 2 | →top: ce consistent punctuation style within article |
| 2022-07-05 22:02 | Diff · History | -4 | →Post-production: ce usage |
| 2022-07-05 22:02 | Diff · History | 5 | →Filming: ce fixed unencyclopedic use of a slang term |
| 2022-07-05 21:59 | Diff · History | -1 | →Cast: ce seems to be a better, more precise preposition |
| 2022-07-03 06:40 | Diff · History | 6 | →Post-production: ce numbers per MOS; incorrect terminology |
| 2022-07-03 06:39 | Diff · History | -11 | →Post-production: ce caps; rm unnec links |
| 2022-07-03 06:30 | Diff · History | -11 | →Plot: ce grammar; simpler |
| 2019-07-19 17:18 | Diff · History | 8 | ce punctuation for clarity and internal style consistency |
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