Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Failed log/June 2021
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was archived by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 2 June 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]
- Nominator(s): The Ultimate Boss (talk) 08:02, 19 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because it is well-sourced and organized. I've used other FL discographies; like Meghan Trainor discography and Bruno Mars discography. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 08:02, 19 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:54, 25 February 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Personally I wouldn't have columns in a table which have no content, but I guess it's not a big deal so OK to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:21, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from LOVI33
- Are you sure that much information is needed on how Pop Smoke started his career. It seems like that information belong's in one of the album/mixtape/single articles. I would just reword to when he signed with Republic Records or when he released his debut single.
- I'm a little confused about the line: "used American rapper Sheff G's song "Panic Part 3"." — did he use it for inspiration? Please specify this.
- In the prose it says his debut single is "Mpr (Panic Part 3 Remix)" but the discography table says "Welcome to the Party". Which one is it?
- giving Pop Smoke his first Hot 100 hit → giving Pop Smoke his first entry on the chart
- The mixtape reached number seven on the US Billboard 200, giving him his first top-10 hit in the United States → The mixtape gave him his first top-10 album on the US Billboard 200, where it peaked at number 7
- After Pop Smoke's death → Following Pop Smoke's death
- Are you sure it is necessary to include how many units Shoot for the Stars, Aim for the Moon sold? That seems like it belongs in the album's article not discography.
- List of albums, with selected details → List of studio albums, with selected chart positions and certifications
- According to the given ref, Shoot for the Stars, Aim for the Moon peaked at number 2 in Sweden.
- List of extended plays, with selected details → List of extended plays
- Maybe add a note that the extended plays are composed of songs from Shoot for the Stars, Aim for the Moon?
- List of mixtapes, with selected details → List of mixtapes, with selected chart positions and certifications
- Remove citation under Meet the Woo 2's peak in Denmark as it appears in the source at the top.
- Remove citation under the mixtape peaks in Sweden as they both appear in the source at the top.
- For all NZ peaks, I recommend using the archive source as peaks for "The Woo", "Mood Swings", "For the Night" and "What You Know Bout Love" aren't backed up by sources on the top. Also so you can remove citations under "For the Night" and "What You Know Bout Love"'s peaks.
- "Iced Out Audemars" (Remix) → "Iced Out Audemars (Remix)"
- Maybe add a note that the original version of "Iced Out Audemars" appears on Shoot for the Stars, Aim for the Moon?
- List of charted songs, showing year released and album name → List of other charted songs, with selected chart positions and certifications, showing album name and year released
- Music video table need MOS:TABLECAPTION
- Only the solo version appears on Meet the Woo → Only the solo version of "Welcome to the Party" appears on Meet the Woo
- Appears on Meet the Woo 2 as "Armed N Dangerous (Charlie Sloth Freestyle)" → "Fire in the Booth, Pt. 1" appears on Meet the Woo 2 as "Armed N Dangerous (Charlie Sloth Freestyle)"
- Ref 19:
- Peaks in Australia → Peak chart positions in Australia
- Also cite Australian-charts.com as publisher not website
- Ref 21: cite Danishcharts.com as publisher not website
- Ref 22: cite Lescharts.com as publisher not website
- Ref 23: cite Irish-charts.com as publisher not website
- Ref 24: cite Dutchcharts.nl as publisher not website
- Ref 26: cite Swedishcharts.com as publisher not website
- Ref 47: cite Hitparade.ch as publisher not website
- Ref 80: remove website parameter
- I think you need to double check your linking of publishers/works/websites on refs. Usually its either you link it on its first appearance or you link it everytime (WP:OVERLINK). Please choose one of these. It is really inconsistent at the moment.
Thats it from me. Good luck! LOVI33 19:12, 7 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- The Ultimate Boss Did you miss this review? (t · c) buidhe 02:31, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Shoot for the Stars: This is still open. Did you abandom this?--Lirim | Talk 21:06, 19 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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