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Talk:K-113 (Kansas highway)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Will211 (talk · contribs) 07:44, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Gonna take a look and review this article sometime later today. Will211|Talk 07:44, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Review

Lead
  • ”Then in a July 7, 1965 resolution, US-24 Spur was renumbered to K-113, and was completed by 1967.” - This sentence is repeated in the article twice. No need to bring up the resolution in the lead.
  • “the first K-113 was designated by 1936, and traveled from K-13 west of Bigelow north to K-9 in Blue Rapids.” - Change to "The original K-113" for consistency
History
  • ”Before state highways were numbered in Kansas there were Auto trails,” - Why is auto capitalized?
  • "”The northern terminus of K-113 connected to the Roosevelt National Highway and Kansas White Way. The southern terminus connected to the Golden Belt Highway” - Connect these sentences to improve the flow of the article
  • "By 1936, the first K-113 was established" - Change to original for consistency
  • "continue northward to K-16 in Odessa, and at this time K-113 was decommissioned." - Is there a different place that can be used to describe this route than Odessa? The K-16 -article doesn’t even mention Odessa, nor is there any Wiki article on the place.
  • "“completed by Amino Brothers Co. Inc. out of Kansas City,” - No need to have the contractor named here, unnecessary detail

Overall the article looks pretty good, will pass once these minor problems are addressed. Will211|Talk 22:05, 6 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Will211: Everything should be fixed now, let me know if I missed something. Thanks 420Traveler (talk) 12:32, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Congrats, passing. Will211|Talk 18:45, 7 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]