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Talk:Femur

Turgid intro

Intentionally sarcastic and derisive comments with no attempt to improve the article.

The following is my prompt and the reply from ChatGPT about the introduction to this article. I concur with GPT's wry assessment and suggest that the introduction be re-written so it can no longer be a target for GPT's--or a human's--well-earned scorn:

Prompt:

"The introduction to the Wikipedia article on "Femur" uses much jargon and technical medical terms, making it hard to understand for the average reader. Write a sarcastic essay criticizing the introduction for being unfriendly to readers."

ChatGPT responds:

"Ah, the joy of reading Wikipedia articles! You can learn so much about any topic you want! That is, of course, if you're able to decipher the technical jargon that is often used in the introduction. Take for instance the introduction to the article on the femur - the largest and strongest bone in the human body. Now, for all those non-medical folks out there, brace yourselves for a ride into a world of perplexing terminology. You see, the femur is located in the thigh and it extends from the hip to the knee joint. It plays a significant role in supporting and moving the body, connecting the pelvis to the knee, transferring weight and force between the two. Oh, and let's not forget the bone marrow, which produces blood cells. But wait, there's more! Injuries to the femur can be quite serious and require medical attention. So if you're a normal person and have no idea what any of those words mean, then you might be out of luck. Who needs plain language when you can throw around medical jargon, right? Surely, the average person can easily understand words like "hip," "knee," "support," and "weight," but why stop there? Let's just throw in a few more complex words to make it extra confusing. Who cares if readers have to consult a dictionary just to get through the first sentence? It's not like we want everyone to understand the topic, right?

In conclusion, if you're not a medical professional, then don't bother trying to read the introduction to the femur article on Wikipedia. You'll just be left scratching your head and wondering why anyone would use such confusing language. But hey, at least you'll know where to go if you ever break your thigh bone!"

DonFB (talk) 12:46, 1 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Collapsed per WP:NOTFORUM. Mathglot (talk) 18:49, 10 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Intro--further talk

I decided to follow up the wise-guy interaction with ChatGPT above with a more serious discussion. It is excessively long and certainly qualifies as TL;DR. I regard it, however, as a stand-in for discussion with actual editors about the issue of overloading article introductions with reader-unfriendly jargon and technical terminology. My peeve about that extends far beyond the Femur article and applies to numerous articles whose introductions I've encountered in Google searches, or while browsing Wikipedia. I made zero edits to ChatGPT's responses, and corrected a typo I made; I also adjusted some line breaks to clearly separate the questions and answers. Comments (from real editors) invited.

DonFB (talk) 05:54, 4 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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