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Nominator: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 20:03, 7 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 21:05, 7 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

• can just link to Oakland Raiders instead of adding the parenthetical comment
• "and the Green Bay Packers"
• was contested at use "played," "held," or even "hosted"
• no commas needed around "Irvin"
• link touchdown
• "blowout" is one word

• we get the Raiders' postseason performance the previous year, but not the Packers'
• write out numbers less than 10 per MOS:NUM (unless using records)
• no commas around "Irvin"
• last sentence of second para can be moved up to the top to connect the two sentences about Irvin Favre
• should link to List of most consecutive starts by an NFL quarterback in the body as you did in the lede
• there was much discussion by whom?
• they would leave it to Favre on whether he would play → they would allow Favre to determine whether he would play
• if you can find a direct quote from Favre on his decision, that would be aces

• The Raiders started the game with the ball and after a quick first down, punted the ball. → The Raiders started the game with possession of the ball and punted after a quick first down.

• to put the Packers up 34–7. → to put the team up 34–7.
• comma after "drove down the field"
• in the last sentence, "Raiders" should be possessive for "Raiders' last drive"

• No stability concerns, nominator is significant contributor
• Images are properly licensed and directly relevant to the article
• Copyvio score looks good