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Reviewer: LOVI33 (talk · contribs) 21:57, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Per your request. Excited to take this on! LOVI33 21:57, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Target Mr. Fingers to Larry Heard

•  Done --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Are you sure The Life of Pablo track listing placement is notable for the lead?

• Removed but I have changed the critical reception info, does it still look fine? --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Yeah looks great! LOVI33 15:16, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Target DJ set to DJ mix

•  Done --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Target minimal to Minimal music

•  Done --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Target Motown to itself
• Target blue-eyed-soul to Blue-eyed soul

•  Done for all --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Looks good!

• Looks good!

• "increasing 130 percent" → "increasing by 130 percent"

•  Done --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "expressing heavy love for the track" → "expressing heavy admiration for the track"

•  Done --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Looks good!

• Looks good!

• Looks good!

• Looks good!

• Looks good!

• Looks good!

• Looks good!

• Looks good!

• Copyvio score looks good at 32.0%
• Ref 8: Kanye West should be cited as publisher
• Ref 16: Magnetic Mag → Magnetic Magazine per the page title

•  Done for all --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Shouldn't this be titled "External link" as there is only one?

•  Not done since this section is commonly titled with a plural when there is just the lyrics as a link

•  On hold for now. As always, the prose is amazing. I just have a few concerns. Great Job! LOVI33 21:26, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• LOVI33 Thanks a lot for the review despite it being slightly delayed, you ready to pass now? --K. Peake 07:14, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Great! ✓ Pass. LOVI33 15:16, 28 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]