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This review is transcluded from Talk:2013 Sepang GP2 Series round/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 16:03, 2 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• but He -> but he - H in lowercase
• his startline advantage to the advantage
• Typo in Coletti's name

• Medium was identified by yellow stripes and hard by orange - what about soft tyres and medium tyres were not mentioned in the previous line about tyre allocation .

• Change driver who won the pole position to driver who won the pole position and his team and and Team's Championship to and Team's Championship respectively .
• Team names in brackets are not required .
• Remove the bracketed words after Sam Bird's name .
• Remove the brackets after Fabio Leimar's name and write like this Fabio Leimar of Racing Engineering .
• Was the four seconds faster lap that Coletti set was that one minute 44.280 lap . ? If yes , ping me and I will tell the modifications.
• Change the track's final sector to the final sector of the track
• What is meant by Nasr usurped him ?
• No need for the bracketed team names .

• In slalom past the middle of Calado and Nasr , remove the words - the middle of
• There is possibly a typo in Ericsson's name .
• Why did the field slow into turn 9 ? If it was for braking, you could write braked into turn nine .
• Didn't a yellow come out after either incident ?
• and they retired after contact to and both of them retired after making contact with each other .
• Change Coletti struggled with his soft compound tyres degrading to Colleti struggled as his soft tyres were degrading .
• Move Leimar's pitting sentence after the sentence describing Abt's incident.
• Why did Evans and Richelmi put themselves wide ?
• Is the Dillmann swerving sentence and the Evans running wide sentence separate sentences . If yes , add a full stop between them .

• The sentence describing Nasr having space can reworded to As a result, his teammate Nasr used the vacant spot left by his teammate Palmer to get ahead ...
• There has been a repetation in the word ran .

• @MWright96: That's all I have . Sorry for the long time this has taken . Kpgjhpjm 16:05, 7 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Kpgjhpjm: Thanks again for doing another review of an article I have expanded. As with the question about the yellow flags, no information is available in the sources to say there waved to warn drivers about the incident. MWright96 (talk) 16:51, 7 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]
    • Promoting . Kpgjhpjm 08:39, 8 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]