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Many thanks, [[User:Noswall59|Noswall59]] ([[User talk:Noswall59|talk]]) 15:39, 18 January 2015 (UTC)
Many thanks, [[User:Noswall59|Noswall59]] ([[User talk:Noswall59|talk]]) 15:39, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

*'''Comment''' The opening sentence is rather confusing as Lincolnshire as a ceremonial county spans the [[East Midlands]] and [[Yorkshire and the Humber]] regions. [[User:Keith D|Keith D]] ([[User talk:Keith D|talk]]) 17:53, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

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Sleaford is a market town in the English county of Lincolnshire, with a population of over 17,000 people and a history dating back to the Iron Age. When I started working on the article back in September 2014, it was 37,000 bytes long, had 44 citations and its structure and prose were inconsistent; I've largely rewritten it and it's now over 130,000 bytes long with more than 300 references. I do believe it's complete in its scope at least, and I now feel it is time to put it up for review. My aim would be to get this to FA and I am looking for any constructive feedback which might help me to get it there.

Many thanks, Noswall59 (talk) 15:39, 18 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]