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== Edit request on 23 September 2012 ==
== Edit request on 23 September 2012 ==

Revision as of 06:44, 29 April 2013

Good articleBarfi! has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Edit request on 23 September 2012

The film contains several jokes and scenes lifted from Hollywood films especially The Notebook: The mother taking the daughter to see the man she loved but chose not to marry, based on which the daughter makes her choice. Final scene being the two lying together on a hospital bed, and talk about living life with your true love and passing away together.

Also copied are Gone, Baby, Gone's girl not having actually died idea, COPS's ladder gag, Charlie Chaplin's Adventurer and City Lights 's sleeping on the statue and door gags, Singin' In The Rain's sofa dummy gag and nose twisting gags, Mr. Bean's painting gag, Mr. Nobody's car headlights turning out to be two bikes, Homealone's using mirror reflection to find who is at the door, Project A's bicycle scene, Japanese film Kikujiro and the Bollywood film Koshish (when Barfi is unable to hear his father's screams). The scene of Barfi reading a fat naked man's newspaper is taken from a Swedish Newspaper Advertisement. This should be mentioned.

 Done. Added plagiarism paragraph along with reliable citations. Sansari13 (talk) 28 December 2012

Disappointed

I'm really disappointed that all sorts of blogs, user reviews and self-published sources are being used in the reception of the music section of the article. Please add reliable third party sources, else those reviews have to be deleted. Regular contributors to this page, please take notice of this and do the needful. (Although, I hardly think anyone cares a damn). —Indian:BIO · [ ChitChat ] 10:29, 27 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Then do it yourself.----Plea$ant 1623 10:31, 16 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

There are some grammatical errors on the page (ex: two beautiful young woman in place of "women"). These need to be corrected. Octopushead (talk) 06:05, 18 September 2012 (UTC)octopushead[reply]

Edit request on 21 September 2012

Narrated by Jayati Bhatia Rish p88 (talk) 06:41, 21 September 2012 (UTC) [1][reply]

 Not done Please provide a reliable source confirming this fact. Electric Catfish2 18:23, 21 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

1972/78

Do we need to split it up into these times? I thought it was simple enough with 'a few years later' — Preceding unsigned comment added by Purplesky91 (talk • contribs) 17:16, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Though I guess Abhishek has framed it well enough for that usage. But I don't think the subheadings need to be appearing in the contextmenu though. Purplesky91 (talk) 17:17, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

As far as my opinion is concerned for movies which walks in flashback/mutiple scenes back an forth.Its good to have separate section to give a comprehensive and understandable view.Others views please?--Sandy (talk) 18:41, 22 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Edit request on 23 September 2012

Starcast: Please add Ashish Vidyarthi ... Mr. Chakraborty, Jhilmil's Father 189.174.83.239 (talk) 08:35, 23 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Done. Torreslfchero (talk) 09:24, 23 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

References

Ohh freak, the references section is completely spoiled. Proper URL is missing. Comments on what to do please! -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫

Well, we have only one thing to do! Re-do all the references. There is no other way, no quick fix.--Dwaipayan (talk) 02:16, 25 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
yeah ,most of the references are spoiled i tried to correct some but they are enough but dont know who spoiled them.Do anyone have any idea.---zeeyanketu talk to me 07:09, 25 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Don't worry, I've fixed all the remaining references.----Plea$ant 1623 12:43, 25 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Pleasant1623 :) -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 06:03, 3 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review

Is anyone interested in a peer review?----Plea$ant 1623 18:35, 1 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

So soon?? Why not wait for a month more, probably??!?? -- ♪Karthik♫ ♪Nadar♫ 06:08, 3 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
yeah, that's too soon. Let the article grow some more.--Dwaipayan (talk) 06:29, 3 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Well, I asked that anyone is interested in a peer review, that didn't meant to do the peer review now. OK, let's wait.----Plea$ant 1623 19:21, 8 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
It has been 1 month, so can we start the peer review process?----Plea$ant 1623 09:51, 4 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Expansion

The "Casting" and "Filming" sections are very small, and it needs a lot of expansion. Comments on what to do please!----Plea$ant 1623 08:38, 27 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]


GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Barfi!/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 14:13, 12 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]


Lead

"his relationship with two girls (Shruti and Jhilmil; who is autistic). " Who is autistic?

 Done
References
  • Please be consistent with linking publishers. I'd link each one or link none at all.
 Done - Linked all the publishers name to maintain consistency.Prashant talk 02:57, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 5. What makes Bollywood Celebden a reliable source?
 Done - Removed.
 Done
  • Ref 47. What makes Flipkart a reliable source?
Yes, Flipkart.com is a notable source, like Amazon or eBay.Prashant talk 02:57, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 71 Check Boc.
 Done

Seems to be of GA quality. I'd have expected to see one or two negative reviews, are you certain it was universally well-received?♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 19:44, 12 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Barfi! has received unanimous critical acclaim. I'm unable to find any negative review.Prashant talk 04:25, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
There are some mixed reviews, though. Will replace to "generally positive".----Plea$ant 1623 05:31, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
 Done ----Plea$ant 1623 05:34, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Mixed reviews? Please document them. Also if you want access to any of the articles on Barfi HighBeam research I'll email them to you unless you have access yourself. I spot some on production and I think some of the sources could be used to further improve this before I pass.♦ Dr. ☠ Blofeld 11:57, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I don't think so....there are any. Using Generaly doesn't prove that. Also, Rotten Tomatoes and ReviewGang proves that it was a critical success. I think the reviews which gave the film three stars are kind of average. So, its neutral.Prashant talk 14:42, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
There is one. ----Plea$ant 1623 16:09, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Okay added that review.Prashant talk 17:02, 13 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
These all things are mentioned in the article.Prashant talk 03:41, 16 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]


GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:
  1. ^ Starting credits as shown in Indian Theatres