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{{re|PeaceThruPramana26}} thinks that the title of foreign secretary ought to be capitalized in the lede of this article. I have explained that [[MOS:JOBTITLES]] requires that this title and others they have capitalized be lowercase. PeaceThruPramana26 disagrees. I am starting this discussion on the article talk page so that interested editors can contribute. [[User:Wallnot|Wallnot]] ([[User talk:Wallnot|talk]]) 23:50, 21 February 2022 (UTC) |
{{re|PeaceThruPramana26}} thinks that the title of foreign secretary ought to be capitalized in the lede of this article. I have explained that [[MOS:JOBTITLES]] requires that this title and others they have capitalized be lowercase. PeaceThruPramana26 disagrees. I am starting this discussion on the article talk page so that interested editors can contribute. [[User:Wallnot|Wallnot]] ([[User talk:Wallnot|talk]]) 23:50, 21 February 2022 (UTC) |
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There seems to be an issue of contention with the capitalisation of the titles of certain positions in the British government on this page. As of right now, I'm currently in an edit war with [[User:Wallnot|Wallnot]] over how both 'Foreign Secretary' and ' ' should be capitalised, with an example of Wallnot's revision with their capitalisation as follows: |
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<blockquote?The secretary of state for foreign, Commonwealth and development affairs, also referred to as the foreign secretary, is a secretary of state in the Government of the United Kingdom, with overall responsibility for the work of the Foreign, Commonwealth and Development Office.[1] Seen as one of the most senior ministers in the government and a Great Office of State, the incumbent is a member of the Cabinet of the United Kingdom, fourth in the ministerial ranking.[2]</blockquote> |
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I disagree with the capitalisation in the following manner, because it isn't consistent (why is 'Commonwealth' capitalised, but 'Development Affairs' not if they're both proper nouns within a title?); it misunderstands [[MOS:JOBTITLES]] since 'Foreign Secretary' isn't being used as a common noun or denoting an office, but a title (e.g 'Madam Foreign Secretary' would be capitalised because it refers to a title held directly by a person--in this case, the Foreign Secretary); and finally, it isn't how the British government itself capitalises the title, as can be seen in [https://www.gov.uk/government/people/elizabeth-truss this] official government gazette release. |
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This was my revision: |
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<blockquote>The Secretary of State for Foreign, Commonwealth and Development Affairs, also referred to as the Foreign Secretary, is a secretary of state in the Government of the United Kingdom, with overall responsibility for the work of the Foreign, Commonwealth and Development Office.[1] Seen as one of the most senior ministers in the government and a Great Office of State, the incumbent is a member of the Cabinet of the United Kingdom, fourth in the ministerial ranking.[2]</blockquote> |
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This is my revision, and I can't see any issue with it, since it's consistent with articles over the rest of wikipedia (e.g, T[[Minister_of_Foreign_Affairs_(Pakistan)|he Minister of Foreign Affairs for Pakistan]], or the [[Foreign Secretary of India]]. When I asked Wallnot why proper nouns that referred to job titles were capitalised, I was referred to MOS:JOBTITLES but not given any additional clarification. Seeing as my edits didn't disagree with the MOS, I then re-inserted the capitals into the source, which prompted Wallnot to threaten me on my page with [[WP:ANI]], while again linking MOS:JOBTITLES while once again failing to highlight what it is that would make it suitable to place proper nouns and job titles in lower capitals on the article. |
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With that said, I request intervention for comment to see what other users think, since I can tell this is a particularily contentious issue for this user. [[User:PeaceThruPramana26|PeaceThruPramana26]] ([[User talk:PeaceThruPramana26|talk]]) 23:53, 21 February 2022 (UTC) |
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Scope
This page should only list the Secretaries for Foreign and Commonwealth Affairs. The previous offices (Secretary of State for Foreign Affairs, Secretary of State for the Colonies, etc.) should have separate articles. john 23:51 May 9, 2003 (UTC)
- Why? They are vastly equivalent roles! Anyway, this has a precedent elsewhere, see Secretary of State for International Development TreveXtalk 00:17, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
- I'm not really sure what the deal was - it was almost three years ago, and there were a lot less articles to take precedents from. As long as it's made clear that the two offices are different, and that the current office includes the gobbled up Commonwealth Affairs Office (which was itself the amalgamation of the Colonial Office and the Commonwealth Relations Office), I don't really care if it's decided to merge. john k 00:53, 28 April 2006 (UTC)
I've reformatted the big list(section 1), but it's badly spaced out, I would fix this but I only did this to show how notepad + copy & paste can do, appologies if this messed anyone elses hard work, please revert if you don't like it, and feel free to fix the spacing --86.133.59.208 18:57, 24 August 2006 (UTC)
- Without the little-used status column the list could be shorter because we could spread out the dates onto one line, though I don't want to (and am not sure how to) make that change on my own. Ddye 02:13, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
- I've removed the status column, I think it looks much better now, as it is shorter and easier to understand.--86.133.59.208 11:10, 25 August 2006 (UTC)
We've lost Jack Straw! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.139.119.84 (talk) 00:08, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
Requested Move
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
The result of the proposal was no consensus to move the page, per the discussion below. Dekimasuよ! 00:03, 4 June 2009 (UTC)
Secretary of State for Foreign and Commonwealth Affairs → Foreign Secretary — The United Kingdom is the only country to have a minister commonly called a "Foreign Secretary"; the vast majority of foreign ministers hold titles which are all pretty much based on the formulations "Minister of/for Foreign Affairs", "Foreign Minister", and "Minister of External Relations". The US, the UK and Vatican City are pretty much the only exceptions with, respectively, "Secretary of State", "Foreign Secretary" and "Secretary for Relations with States". Foreign Secretary and Foreign secretary already redirect here. YeshuaDavid (talk) 23:35, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
Discussion
- Any additional comments:
To respond to Skinsmoke: you are right in that "Foreign Secretary" is a common name name and not the full title, but WP:UCN stipulates we use the most comnon name where possible an appropriate. It's for that reason we use United Kingdom, not United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, and FA Cup, not The Football Association Challenge Cup. YeshuaDavid (talk) 18:04, 30 May 2009 (UTC)
Survey
- Feel free to state your position on the renaming proposal by beginning a new line in this section with
*'''Support'''
or*'''Oppose'''
, then sign your comment with~~~~
. Since polling is not a substitute for discussion, please explain your reasons, taking into account Wikipedia's naming conventions.
- Support as nominator. YeshuaDavid (talk) 23:35, 27 May 2009 (UTC)
- Oppose: The official title is Secretary of State for Foreign and Commonwealth Affairs. Foreign Secretary is an informal shorthand version. Skinsmoke (talk) 17:09, 30 May 2009 (UTC)
- Oppose: I would prefer to use the official title with the existing redirect from Foreign Secretary--Harkey (talk) 18:24, 30 May 2009 (UTC)
- The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the proposal. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page. No further edits should be made to this section.
I appreciate the discussion is now closed, but I'd suggest that this decision is not comsistent with established naning conventions. Wikipedia articles are not based on official names - they are based on commonly used names. See WP:COMMONNAME:
Except where other accepted Wikipedia naming conventions give a different indication, title an article using the most common name of the person or thing that is the subject of the article (making the title unique when necessary as described in the following section and in the disambiguation guideline) (emphasis added)
AndrewRT(Talk)(WMUK) 11:30, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
- The most important thing is that Foreign Secretary continues to redirect here, i dont have a problem with the full title being used. BritishWatcher (talk) 11:43, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
Style
I've noticed someone has edited the style for all cabinet ministers and added "Mr/Madam Secretary" - this sounds terribly American so I will change this within the week unless a source is provided to support this style of address.
Loobeloo (talk) 09:37, 24 May 2016 (UTC)
Which name to use?
Which name should be used for Foreign Secretaries who inherited or were granted a title/higher title during their time in office? This would apply to Carmarthen/Leeds, Castlereagh/Londonderry, Dudley, Russell, Grey, Curzon, and Eden (who was made a knight during his last tenure at the foreign office). Currently, I believe all except Grey are listed by their highest title, but I'm not sure that's the best way to do it. It means, for instance, that the word "Castlereagh" does not appear in our article about British foreign secretaries. I'd suggest some mechanism to include both, with possible preference for the form at time of appointment as the main one displayed. john k (talk) 19:20, 3 February 2019 (UTC)
Requested move 25 January 2021
- The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The result of the move request was: moved. (non-admin closure) Celia Homeford (talk) 14:19, 20 February 2021 (UTC)
Secretary of State for Foreign, Commonwealth and Development Affairs → Foreign Secretary – (or Alternatively Foreign Secretary (United Kingdom)). As "Foreign Secretary" is overwhelming the common name for the position with almost all reliable sources refererring to the position as simply "Foreign Secretary" [1][2][3][4][5][6][7][8][9][10][11]. Google Ngram Viewer also shows the much more for the term "Foreign Secretary" than "Secretary of State for Foreign, Commonwealth and Development Affairs" [12]. The term would already be precise/unambigous as it "Foreign Secretary" already redirects here but if not just use "Foreign Secretary (United Kingdom)". Either way is more concise than the current title. Spy-cicle💥 Talk? 00:26, 25 January 2021 (UTC) —Relisting. ProcrastinatingReader (talk) 17:31, 2 February 2021 (UTC) —Relisting. —Nnadigoodluck███ 23:24, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
- Support seems to be the primary topic for "foreign secretary"[13] (t · c) buidhe 02:33, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- Support per WP:COMMONNAME. BD2412 T 05:34, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- Support per nom. Clear common name and primary topic. -- Necrothesp (talk) 10:15, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- Oppose Due to that secretary needs to use official name over WP:COMMONNAME. I also cite the same argument about this in 2009. If this article need to move, i would prefer it as Foreign Secretary (United Kingdom) because there are multiple agencies and ministeries that have named itself as Foreign secretary which the page itself is a DAB page. 110.137.190.132 (talk) 13:01, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- What policy/guideline suggest using the official name instead of the common name? To my knowledge common name is far more important in deciding the article name. Also Foriegn Secretary already redirects here. Spy-cicle💥 Talk? 13:50, 25 January 2021 (UTC)
- Move to Foreign Secretary (United Kingdom) and have Foreign Secretary redirect to the Foreign secretary disambig page. WP:SMALLDETAILS should NOT apply because all those other offices also have the upper case "S" in Secretary. And on the issue of primary topic in terms of usage, of course the UK article's page views are going to be heavily skewed and bias on the English Wikipedia compared to those foreign secretaries in countries where English speakers are either in the minority or few and far between. Zzyzx11 (talk) 02:43, 28 January 2021 (UTC)
- The point is that this is English Wikipedia! It may not be the primary topic in other languages; it is in the English language. -- Necrothesp (talk) 11:30, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
- Move to Foreign Secretary (United Kingdom) and move the DAB to Foreign Secretary. Every single entry at Foreign secretary is capitalised. Andrewa (talk) 05:24, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- Relisting comment: Appears to be a consensus to move above, but no clear consensus on whether the move should be to Foreign Secretary, or to Foreign Secretary (United Kingdom) with Foreign Secretary redirecting to the dab page. ProcrastinatingReader (talk) 17:31, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- Support per policy, common sense and official government use. // Hippo43 (talk) 17:35, 2 February 2021 (UTC)
- Support. Primary topic, common name, and more appropriate title given the scope of the article, which includes the earlier offices known as 'Foreign Secretary'. DrKay (talk) 13:50, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
- Move to Foreign Secretary (United Kingdom) and move the DAB to Foreign Secretary per Andrewa above. No Great Shaker (talk) 14:35, 6 February 2021 (UTC)
- Relisting comment: There's consensus to move this page from its current name, but still, there is no clear consensus on whether the move should be to Foreign Secretary, or to Foreign Secretary (United Kingdom) with Foreign Secretary redirecting to the dab page. So, relisting again. —Nnadigoodluck███ 23:27, 9 February 2021 (UTC)
- Support. "Foreign Secretary" has redirected here as the primary redirect for years and I think this topic is the primary topic for that term. Rreagan007 (talk) 00:21, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
- Support per nom and WP:PRIMARYTOPIC. ‑‑Neveselbert (talk · contribs · email) 01:22, 10 February 2021 (UTC)
- The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Capitalization of title
@PeaceThruPramana26: thinks that the title of foreign secretary ought to be capitalized in the lede of this article. I have explained that MOS:JOBTITLES requires that this title and others they have capitalized be lowercase. PeaceThruPramana26 disagrees. I am starting this discussion on the article talk page so that interested editors can contribute. Wallnot (talk) 23:50, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
RFC: capitalisation issues
There seems to be an issue of contention with the capitalisation of the titles of certain positions in the British government on this page. As of right now, I'm currently in an edit war with Wallnot over how both 'Foreign Secretary' and ' ' should be capitalised, with an example of Wallnot's revision with their capitalisation as follows:
<blockquote?The secretary of state for foreign, Commonwealth and development affairs, also referred to as the foreign secretary, is a secretary of state in the Government of the United Kingdom, with overall responsibility for the work of the Foreign, Commonwealth and Development Office.[1] Seen as one of the most senior ministers in the government and a Great Office of State, the incumbent is a member of the Cabinet of the United Kingdom, fourth in the ministerial ranking.[2]
I disagree with the capitalisation in the following manner, because it isn't consistent (why is 'Commonwealth' capitalised, but 'Development Affairs' not if they're both proper nouns within a title?); it misunderstands MOS:JOBTITLES since 'Foreign Secretary' isn't being used as a common noun or denoting an office, but a title (e.g 'Madam Foreign Secretary' would be capitalised because it refers to a title held directly by a person--in this case, the Foreign Secretary); and finally, it isn't how the British government itself capitalises the title, as can be seen in this official government gazette release.
This was my revision:
The Secretary of State for Foreign, Commonwealth and Development Affairs, also referred to as the Foreign Secretary, is a secretary of state in the Government of the United Kingdom, with overall responsibility for the work of the Foreign, Commonwealth and Development Office.[1] Seen as one of the most senior ministers in the government and a Great Office of State, the incumbent is a member of the Cabinet of the United Kingdom, fourth in the ministerial ranking.[2]
This is my revision, and I can't see any issue with it, since it's consistent with articles over the rest of wikipedia (e.g, The Minister of Foreign Affairs for Pakistan, or the Foreign Secretary of India. When I asked Wallnot why proper nouns that referred to job titles were capitalised, I was referred to MOS:JOBTITLES but not given any additional clarification. Seeing as my edits didn't disagree with the MOS, I then re-inserted the capitals into the source, which prompted Wallnot to threaten me on my page with WP:ANI, while again linking MOS:JOBTITLES while once again failing to highlight what it is that would make it suitable to place proper nouns and job titles in lower capitals on the article.
With that said, I request intervention for comment to see what other users think, since I can tell this is a particularily contentious issue for this user. PeaceThruPramana26 (talk) 23:53, 21 February 2022 (UTC)