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Following in the wake of the success of The Boat Race 2012, this one is next in my pipeline for FAC. A successful GA, this has some interesting facets to it and I'd like some other non-involved eyes to give it a look over.

Thanks in advance for your time and efforts, The Rambling Man (talk) 09:38, 17 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "Oxford were strong pre-race favourites, having won 16 of the last 17 races." - third mention of last 17 races. Sentence is not needed.

  It's only the second mention. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:36, 30 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Why is Goldie wikilinked but not Isis?

  There's no article for Isis. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:36, 30 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Ref 18 needs an access date.

  Added. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:36, 30 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:36, 30 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "for the first time in the history of the race" could just be shortened to "for the first time"
• "Cambridge prevented Oxford making it seventeen wins" doesn't sound right to me. Would "Cambridge prevented Oxford winning seventeen times" be better?
• Images lack alt-text.

Good luck on the featured article nomination!