Langbahn Team – Weltmeisterschaft

Wikipedia:Peer review/Crohn's disease/archive2

Previous peer review

This is a serious disease that affects many people, so I want to get it to the featured article status that it deserves. I've overhauled and updated every section of the article. Please review my work so we can make this a good resource for others.

Thanks! AdeptLearner123 (talk) 04:53, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

IntentionallyDense

  • The lead should be cut down to 4 paragraphs.
  • I feel like the differential diagnosis section could be expanded a bit.
  • Per WP:MEDDATE "In many topics, a review that was conducted more than five or so years ago will have been superseded by more up-to-date ones, and editors should try to find those newer sources, to determine whether the expert opinion has changed since the older sources were written." I would suggest trying to find alternatives for any sources that were published pre-2014 and limiting the number of sources published pre-2019.

I only took a quick glance at the article but I may have more input later on. IntentionallyDense (talk) 23:29, 27 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

WikiOriginal-9

There were 257 references before the recent edits. Now there are only 45? Is this actually an improvement? ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 02:40, 4 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Query from Z1720

@AdeptLearner123: It has been over a month since the last comment at this PR. Is this ready to be closed and nominated for WP:FAC? Z1720 (talk) 15:37, 19 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]