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Talk:New York State Route 342

Good articleNew York State Route 342 has been listed as one of the Engineering and technology good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
November 11, 2008Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:New York State Route 342/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  • In the west, NY 342 begins at an intersection with NY 12 in Pamelia, just a few miles north of Watertown. - "A few miles" needs a rough conversion.
  • An intersection with US 11 is not far off, and NY 342 subsequently passes the Fort Drum Military Reservation. - Find better wording for "is not far off", which is rather informal.
  • Planning for the highway started in 2002 and 2003, with the plans to reconstruct starting and ending in 2013 and 2014. - Needs to be worded better; as it is it's slightly confusing.
  • The cost with the planned project would be $6.4 million - Change "with" to "of"
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

On hold for now. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 17:55, 11 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

All comments are resolved.Mitch32(UP) 20:40, 11 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]