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This review is transcluded from Talk:Lucienne's Quest/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 02:42, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

• I feel like the Gameplay image could use a slightly more detailed caption
  • Done
• I'd specify what year Suikoden was released
  • Done
• "Suikoden.[1] taking place" - you need to replace the period with a comma
  • Whoops, done
• "again writing more positively, wrote" - using 'writing' and 'wrote' so closely together reads a little awkward. I'd change 'wrote' to 'said'
  • Done
• Are you sure there aren't any other reviews of the Saturn port? Also at least one example of what made the port a 'catastrophe' would be of interest.
  • You are totally right, there is. I will get this added tomorrow...also pinging @Salvidrim!: because he translated the review that said 'catastrophe'.
• Reference 3 clarifies that it is in French, and reference 5 clarifies that it is in Japanese. Reference 6 also needs to specify the language. Looks like refs five and six need publishers also.
  • Fixed. The publisher/website names were there but written in JP so it was indiscernible. I changed to English.

Looks good overall. Placing on hold until issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 02:42, 27 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Work in progress...I will ping when done. TarkusAB^talk 07:41, 28 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

No worries. I'd be happy to pass this once another Saturn review is added. I won't hold things up for the 'catastrophe' explanation but i'd still encourage you to add that later if you can. Freikorp (talk) 10:12, 28 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I think the catastrophe word is fine, I added the full quote + translation in the ref, and it's properly attributed (Joypad said ...) and not as a statement of fact (the game was...) which would have required multiple sources all calling it the same. Ben · Salvidrim! ✉ 15:29, 28 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Ben. And @Freikorp: I added a review from Sega Saturn Magazine TarkusAB^talk 03:54, 29 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Happy to pass this now. Congrats. :) Freikorp (talk) 04:01, 29 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Leaving a note for myself or Tarkus, the JP refs need a |trans-title= field added with a translation of the Japanese title of the reference. Ben · Salvidrim! ✉ 04:07, 29 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]