Langbahn Team – Weltmeisterschaft

Talk:Communist Party Marxist – Kenya

Tone of the article and citation puffery

The tone of this article does not sound neutral nor objective. I could read most of this article like an official publication from the party. Take for example, the section "Rectification programme":

Following the publications of the party's internal reflections in October 2022, the majority faction resolved to address the struggle against revisionism and opportunism that had emerged within the party's leadership during the 2022 general elections. Guided by Marxist-Leninist principles, the party had resolved to maintain its independence, rejecting alliances with bourgeois coalitions dominated by comprador interests. However, a reactionary clique led by Mwandawiro Mghanga and Benedict Wachira violated this line by collaborating with the Kenya Kwanza coalition, betraying the party's revolutionary mission. The maneuver exposed the destructive influence of revisionism, leading to a principled split. Through a rigorous rectification programme, the revolutionary majority faction declared they had rooted out the counter-revolutionary tendencies and re-established unity in thought and action. It served to reaffirm the party's commitment to the revolutionary path, address the Mau Mau rebellion, and reinvigorate the members and the vanguard dedicated to achieving a People's Democratic Revolution and constructing a socialist Kenya.

There are numerous labels applied uncritically in this paragraph – "reactionary", "comprador", "revisionist", "principled", etc. – with no explanations, attributions or responses to them.

Another problem is many (most) of the citations in this article do not reference the party at all. If you just look at the references list, you might think the article is well cited. However, the article will state an event or belief and give a citation for it that speaks about it generally or broadly. For example, the second paragraph under "Ideological positions" cites eleven works, but all of them predate the party and discuss the issues in general.

The citations that do discuss the party are published by party members, party affiliates, or the party itself. I'm not sure this party's notability holds up to scrutiny. These issues are also present in the article for the party's leader, Booker Omole. Yue🌙 05:17, 26 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]