Talk:Coming Up to Breathe
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on November 16, 2011. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that the string sections on MercyMe's 2006 album Coming Up to Breathe were recorded at Abbey Road Studios by the London Session Orchestra? | |||||||||||||
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GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Coming Up to Breathe/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 03:47, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- Coming Up to Breathe is the fifth major label, full-length studio album from MercyMe.
- Released in on April 25, 2006,
- Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews from critics
- "Something Like You" has been compared to the sound of U2 (particularly the song "Where The Streets Have No Name"),[6] while "3:42 a.m. (Writer's Block)" has been described as 'soulful classic rock'
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- "Background" has basically every period cited with FN#1 which makes the article look even more clumsy
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Saying "Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews." is being biased
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Active users have been reverting vandalism, which was last done back in mid November 2011
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- File:Mercyme cutb.jpg does not comply with WP:NFCC; its rational is very very weak and does not give a suitable reasoning on why a non-free artwork gives any educational value. The second file completely fails WP:NFCC.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- I suggest you fixed all of these concerns, get it copy edited, allow others to give it a WP:PR and then re-nominate at a later date. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 23:23, 27 December 2011 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Coming Up to Breathe/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Infobox
- For the "Recorded" section, show what year it was recorded followed by a semicolon and a list of studios where it was recorded (Ex: 2009; Studio 1, Studio 2)
- Singles do not need to be sourced in the infobox because they have their own respective articles
Lead
- Released on April 25, 2006... → "Released on April 25, 2006 by INO Records..."
Background
- No issues
Composition
- Two subsections not necessary in this context
Critical reception
- No issues
Singles
- An album cut from the album, "No More No Less", spent one frame on the Hot Christian Songs chart, debuting and peaking at number thirty..[31] → Get rid of extra period at end of statement
Release
- Replace all of the "No."s with "number"
Track listing
- No issues
Personnel
- No issues
Charts and certifications
- No issues
References
- If you mention a work or publisher in a reference and it is wiki-linked, do not wiki-link it for further references
- Only italicize publications in the "work=" parameter
- Proofread all of these to ensure errors are not made; for a guideline to follow, use WP:REFERENCE
- Fixed all. Toa Nidhiki05 19:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are a few prose issues, and things mostly just need to be proofread in the references section for this article to pass. I will give you the general seven days to fix mistakes, address points I have made, and/or ask me any questions that you have. Rp0211 (talk2me) 18:35, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- All issues have now been addressed, so I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work you are doing! Rp0211 (talk2me) 01:46, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
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Can you please contact Oshwah or another administrator to protect this page if I ever keep reverting edits, Binksternet? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Better Than My Life (talk • contribs) 20:20, 8 February 2021 (UTC)