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Talk:7:15 A.M.

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:7:15 A.M./GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Buffbills7701 (talk · contribs) 01:06, 8 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "Mary Margaret is seen reading The Mysterious Island by Jules Verne, which is a book also featured in TRON: Legacy, a film written by Horowitz and Kitsis." Even though they are both by the same creators, what does the part about TRON: Legacy have to do with 7:15 A.M?
  • "He felt that it was "the strongest episode of the series since Rumpelstiltskin’s first fairyback..." Fairyback isn't a word, and the link to Desperate Souls doesn't tell me what fairyback means, nor why the link should be there.
  • Fairyback is not my word, but the reviewer's. I have tweaked the mention of "Desperate Souls". Ruby 2010/2013 04:26, 8 January 2014 (UTC) I have removed that part of the quote and changed it to "flashback." Ruby 2010/2013 04:28, 8 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Ralph Hemecker directed the hour." What does this sentence mean?

References

  • "The episode's teleplay was written by executive story editor Daniel T. Thomsen, while co-creators Adam Horowitz and Edward Kitsis co-wrote the story." Can you add a reference about this? It shouldn't be too hard.
  • The second paragraph of the "Production" section needs more sources.
  • " An estimated 9.30 million viewers watched the episode, placing second in its timeslot behind a NFC Championship Game between the New York Giants and the San Francisco 49ers." Source?
  • "Writing for IGN, Amy Ratcliffe gave "7:15 A.M." a score of 7 out of 10, an indication of a "good" episode." Once again, where's the IGN review on this? Shouldn't be too hard.

Decision

After reviewing the article, I have decided to put this on hold for a week. It's mainly referencing that needs work. buffbills7701 01:06, 8 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I have made the changes per your comments. Everything in the article is sourced to the following citation (this includes IGN, TV by the Numbers, etc.). I have repeated the citations in case that's what you were looking for. Ruby 2010/2013 04:26, 8 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for reading the citations. This article passes. buffbills7701 13:17, 8 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Quelle: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:7:15_A.M.