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This review is transcluded from Talk:3rd Congress of the Indonesian Democratic Party/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 22:07, 15 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Opening Kingsif (talk) 22:07, 15 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Level of English poor throughout, including lead. To the point I can barely understand it, and don't understand what some parts are trying to say.
• Lead about the right length
• On structure:
  • 'Nominations' is a very vague header and should be written sentence style, i.e. Nominations for PDI chairman (same goes for 'Opening', 'Candidates', 'Announcement')
  • 'Reaction' should be its own section, of which 'Formation of CEC' would presumably a subsection
• Fail things to work on from a structural perspective - detailed comments on writing would be too long and unnecessary, as it needs completely rewriting

• Lots of background detail, maybe too much?
• On the other hand, there seem to be some acronyms and people mentioned with no introduction - what are these things?
• Probably a good amount of detail on the event, though hard to tell
• Needs work

• Suitable image of new chairman, and table
• I can't find any context for the Sabam Sirait image, so I don't know
• Both photos PD
• ?

• No idea

• History fine
• Pass

• I don't know of the reliability of Indonesian sources, nor do I speak the language. I've asked for help at the Indonesia project here.
• There are inline citations
• ?

• Two PD images
• Can't check offline foreign language text myself
• ?

The level of English gives this a quick fail - it can't be understood, if I were reviewing this as a new page I would suggest it goes to Draft or at least tag it with a translation template. Kingsif (talk) 22:23, 15 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]