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Talk:Tricia Bader Binford/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:55, 18 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 06:39, 19 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 21:13, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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I think this article could really be improved with adding some newspaper source material. It's not like The Idaho Statesman and The Plain Dealer are in Newspapers.com or anything... And given even a cursory look at these omitted sources, that's the primary task out of this review. It will bolster the article and round it out from being a little bit on the skeletal side with information on her career. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:49, 17 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

Copy changes

  • I made a bunch of copy edits.
  • I find that the prose tends to be very numerical and stat-heavy in the playing career section. I wonder if newspaper sourcing would help add non-statistical content that would beef up the article.

Sourcing and spot checks

I'm very surprised to see no newspaper sources here. In fact, I was so surprised that I found someone had made about 30 clippings related to Bader. Take a look at the papers where she played.

Reviewed: 2, 6, 15, 16, 18.

  • The trading card source can be deleted with newspaper material from Cleveland available. It appears she was not traded but waived by Utah and claimed off waivers by a Cleveland team needing depth at point guard after an injury to Suzie McConnell-Serio.[1][2]

References

  1. ^ Glaros, Denise (July 25, 1999). "Rockers can't catch Starzz: Cleveland falls again as Utah pulls away to take 76–70 victory". The Plain Dealer. Cleveland, Ohio. p. 14-C. Retrieved January 17, 2025 – via Newspapers.com.
  2. ^ Glaros, Denise (July 29, 1999). "Rockers' Bader takes star's words to heart". The Plain Dealer. Cleveland, Ohio. p. 3-D. Retrieved January 17, 2025 – via Newspapers.com.
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