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Nominator: Dora the Axe-plorer (talk · contribs) 10:10, 9 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 02:31, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Just take a fresh look, check it, maybe add some city links, and that's about it. You might want to harmonize citation templates, but that's not a GA issue. Ping me when addressed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:57, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Sammi Brie Hi, I'm done addressing your pointers. Though could you point out the citation styles you're referring to? I may be missing something. Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 04:57, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know? If you fancy doing so, I always have plenty of GA nominees to review. Just look for the all-uppercase titles in the Television section. Reviews always appreciated.

• Consider linking cities in lead.

Done Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 03:51, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed some missing or redundant words.

Done Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 04:54, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• Some of your semicolon uses call for colons or commas. Semicolons are most often used with lists that contain items with commas or to connect otherwise separate sentences.

Done Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 04:56, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Not a GA item, but I notice a mix of citation styles 1 and 2 here.

Reviewed: 4, 12, 14, 18, 20. No issues.

I'm not sure I understand what do you mean here. Can you clarify? Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 03:35, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

• • • Read Help:Citation Style 1 for some context. I cleaned this up with a minor edit. It wasn't necessary for GA, but I figured I'd address it since I noticed. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:32, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

The shakemap is PD-USGov. Encouragement: Add alt text, in this case summarizing where the shaking was centered.

I've added an alt text. regarding the first point, PD-USGov-USGS is created specifically for USGS content, I don't see need to generalize under PD-USGov Dora the Axe-plorer (explore) 03:18, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

I was being generic with the licensing mention. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:14, 14 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]