Hi! I would like to inform you that the Articles for Creation submission which was previously located here: User:Akhooha/Sue draheim has been moved to Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sue draheim, this move was made automatically and doesn't affect your article. Your draft is waiting for a review by an experienced editor, if you have any questions please ask on our Help Desk! Have a nice day. ArticlesForCreationBot (talk) 18:00, 17 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you for your recent submission to Articles for Creation. Your article submission has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. Please view your submission to see the comments left by the reviewer. You are welcome to edit the submission to address the issues raised, and resubmit once you feel they have been resolved.

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TheOneSean | Talk to me 01:09, 7 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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TheOneSean | Talk to me 16:24, 8 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The Draheim proto-article is significantly improved, yes. I'm not sure I'd say it's ready yet, though.

A tip -- refer to her as "Draheim", not as "Sue". DS (talk) 11:08, 18 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the advice. I hadn't realized that first name only use doesn't sound all that objective. I know I've still got quite a ways to go in terms of organization and fleshing out the chronology, but now that you've pointed me in the direction of the right tunnel, I think I'm beginning to see a light at the end of it. Akhooha (talk) 13:30, 18 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Please see User talk:Jamesx12345 for a thread about your article (I am the reviewer that declined it). It is very good in the most part, but the use of a few cliches detracts somewhat from it. If you want, I could move it to mainspace now so other people can see it in order to work on it and give their opinion. Just contact me on my talk page. Many thanks. Jamesx12345 (talk) 16:13, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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