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This article reads like an autobiography. 66.27.74.90 seems to be a sock-puppet of Robert Young Pelton. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/88.127.229.107|88.127.229.107]] ([[User talk:88.127.229.107|talk]]) 12:49, 22 January 2013 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->
This article reads like an autobiography. 66.27.74.90 seems to be a sock-puppet of Robert Young Pelton. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/88.127.229.107|88.127.229.107]] ([[User talk:88.127.229.107|talk]]) 12:49, 22 January 2013 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:Unsigned IP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot-->

==Written like an advertisement==
This article has major problems. In wording and content it gives the impression that Messiah is back on Earth. I do like RYP myself, but having read the article I feel like I've just been spoon-fed a kilo of white sugar. [[User:Armigo|Armigo]] ([[User talk:Armigo|talk]]) 14:51, 31 January 2013 (UTC)

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Need copy editing

Numerous spelling and link typos exist. I just added a 'c' for a .com. Additionally, various link boundaries over run into other words making inactive or poor links. I believe that Robert has admitted that he lives in Redondo Beach not merely LA. 143.232.210.38 (talk) 21:09, 12 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Autobiography

This article reads like an autobiography. 66.27.74.90 seems to be a sock-puppet of Robert Young Pelton. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 88.127.229.107 (talk) 12:49, 22 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Written like an advertisement

This article has major problems. In wording and content it gives the impression that Messiah is back on Earth. I do like RYP myself, but having read the article I feel like I've just been spoon-fed a kilo of white sugar. Armigo (talk) 14:51, 31 January 2013 (UTC)[reply]